User blog comment:Zombiekiller14/My Left 4 Dead 3 Plot/@comment-1458268-20101207153903

Not really bad. I have such a concept myself, and judging with all my "experience" i can say that it's quite decent. However, i'd move to the cons already. First of all, the survivors. They don't look like they're from a game - they're all MUCH MORE like movie survivors. All too young, and some of the archetypes you chose aren't very appealing to the players. Especially Katie. They always say that the survivors aren't terrified enough. No shit, if there would be at least ONE somewhat whiny one, they'll automatically hate the shucks out of him. Look at Nick - if he wasn't funny and badass himself, he'd be hated. Internationally.

Next, you DIDN'T have to change the weapons. Personally, i love the old SMG. Why not just add that goshdarn MP5 as the third weapon. The Storm Rifle looks like something from WW2 for the average player's eye. And while AK47 is totally okay when it comes to this question, i don't think this german thingy will pass. Now that the pistol is totally BADASS, i dislike the idea of dual magnums. First of all, they're imbalanced by now. And second... DID YOU SEE THE MAGNUM? This elephantkiller isn't very light, i think. The Revolver... WHY. No, i mean, more damage? Magnum is an insta-kill already, and its' damage is enoff to deal with SI. So, i'd like it more if it was a campaign-specific skin. But, being honest, i got this for my own concept. Now, the melee, here comes the sad truth - they all deal 250 damage. The only differences are arcs, speed and hitboxes. But i like those ideas.

Now, the campaigns. Death School... The name isn't very pretty, being honest. And my first thought when i've seen the chapters was "Dark Carnival". Change the names. DS2 - which one does it copy?

Riverbound's got a cool name and a strange story. My metal boy, the firefighter would be torn to shreds 4 chapters later, when you return. You'd better kill him off.

Dead in the Night sounds REALLY, REALLY promising - i can't say a lot about it now.

Now, what can i tell you... You may actually want to add some examples of the survivors' conversations, of their appearance. And add your own UCI. Though i can't blame you for using Valve's.

But worst of all, L4D3 itself. Don't call it L4D3. Seriously.

P.S. Now that we're clearly not closed for such blogposts, may i post my concept here oneday? Just asking.